The last guy summed it up...
It's really too short to get high marks. It's not bad for sticks, especially if it's your first, but it's short and pointless.
The last guy summed it up...
It's really too short to get high marks. It's not bad for sticks, especially if it's your first, but it's short and pointless.
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Here's what I think
First and foremost, bravo to you for avoiding sticks. No matter how great a stick movie is, a stick movie can only be so good. Sticks lack potential for greatness, the best they can be is "pretty good". Anyway, you're poem idea is somewhat original. This flash is kinda short, and I found it funny how it suddenly ends right after the action starts (sorry). All and all though, not too shabby.
An honest review...
The music is a bit annoying, but for such a short flash that doesn't matter. The graphics are... Sticks, so I can't give you much of a score there. I will say, however, that the animation is very smooth but also very slow. If you would speed this up I bet that everyone's overall rating would go up by like 2 at least. Just a suggestion though.
By The Gods...
I don't believe it dude. A guy right, a stupid looking guy, who shoots people?!? For no reason?!? THAT's never been done. Oh, and... maybe it's wishful thinking... but did I see STICKS?!? WOWIE, JEE WILIKERS!!! That stick art must have taken so much time and effort. And the many places where there were graphical errors (watch the flash, they're not hard to find) only further the way I feel about this flash.
Well...
Not a whole lot was said or shown. The idea seems appealing and I look forward to the flash, but this preview basically just showed off a few pretty pictures, nothing major.
I'm a bit harsh on reviewing but...
First off, I want you to understand that I really like this. I think this is very very good, but I tend to give lower scores than necessary because I know some day that the messiah of flashes will appear and I want that flash to recieve my only ever perfect score. Anyway, I like your art. Your animation was good and I know it will only get better. Your hero's voice was a little... unenthusiastic. I assume that's your real voice so I know this is asking a lot, but I think it would benefit from possibly OVER-acting the voice part. The humor was... Like Spider-man on a bad day. Wasn't really funny, just kind of sarcastic. Too many jokes like that tend to make the viewer root for the bad guy... Please take this as constructive criticism. I'm not saying your flash is bad, quite the opposite. I think this is really good. I'm just telling you what I think would improve it. Take it or leave it. Nice work overall though man!
Please understand...
You have talent, I notice this. If you had created this (plot and all) as a dbz fan flash kind of thing I would be giving you a perfect score, but if you simply take a dbz movie/episode and draw a stick version of it, you're basically taking credit for someone else's work. All of the audio seems to be taken from actual dbz, so that means every time trunks shouts as he throws a kick, every time vegeta grunts from being hit, every time Goku blasts a Kamehameha, that's EXACTLY what's going to happen in your flash. So, more or less, you're stealing from dbz, and I don't give high scores to stolen flashes. If you make a flash that's original, I'll look forward to it because you seem to have skill with animation, but then that could be from the popular dbz movie trace thing that ppl are doing. I hope I've made my point clearly and if the truth has pissed you off then you probably agreed with me...
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