A lot like the other ones... Unfortunately...
In the vein of positive reinforcement, allow me to say I like your art. Your ability to draw a single picture is what I'm admiring, not your animation or ability to make it move, but we'll come back to that. The music went very well with the piece and the voice recording (though riddled with cheesy lines) seemed professionally recorded, no hissing or popping or anything like that. The little girl's stuff left a bit to be desired, but... meh. Now on to the bad stuff. The lines are about as pleasant as shoving a rotisserie up my ass and rotating over an open flame. Some people like Spider-man base their character on witty lines. They teeter on the edge of annoyance but pull it off, leaving the viewer amused and entertained. Dirge's "wit" if that's what you choose to call it simply leaves me disgusted. I'm hoping this series ends with him taking a nice long bath in acid or something. Despite his utter annoyance and the overdone plot, there's the confusing "i won't ask questions, i'll just be your friend now" attitude that the characters often express for seemingly no reason (the little girl peacefully traveling with dirge, dirge mysteriously forgetting that the chick he goes with in this flash attacked him in an earlier one, etc.). By far however, BY FAR, the most disappointing aspect of this flash is the sheer laziness of the animator. As I stated, the art is very good, in fact if this was a comic book I would have nothing but praise for the artist, but as a cartoon this is just lazy. Everything seems tweened. You should learn how to animate, it would greatly help the quality of your work. I sincerely hope you improve in the field of animation, it's a shame to see such a talent at art displayed with such a half-assed attempt at animation.