Ugh...
I don't like sprite movies much, but I hate Madness with a passion. You can't get much more overrated.
Ugh...
I don't like sprite movies much, but I hate Madness with a passion. You can't get much more overrated.
Really?
Did you censor the word "sod", or did you just pronounce "shit" strangely? Nevermind. Either way it's odd to see anything censored on newgrounds. Especially with all the other stuff said and done in this flash. I'm so confused. I'm going to click that o button, for "oh my goodness, this was good!"
The word you were looking for was "twat". we bleeped it cause a) a well timed bleep can be comedy gold and b) the rest of the langauge in the flash itself isnt super strong while "twat" is.
Well
I felt the need to post a review simply to disagree with Hiroo. The impalement was very necessary and it was what earned you my 5. Thank you for that sir, you have made my life worth living again.
Cool
Not half bad for being a 24-hour flash, and I did enjoy the ending.
I'll be honest instead of just kissing ass.
The animation on this is really good. Yeah, the tween abuse was definitely there, but the fbf was better than 3/4ths of the stuff on Newgrounds. The length is really impressive too. I love flashes that can go on for a while and entertain me rather than just be a brief spurt that seems rushed. I think your author's comments were kind of attention whoring though, lol. Obviously you didn't lose all will to work on this or you wouldn't have worked on it. The act of working on it at all requires will unless you're a robot. Even if someone had a gun to your head, if you worked on it it would be because you have the WILL to do so, even if your goal is just to stay alive. So yeah, that was totally reaching.
That aside though, The plot seems a little cliched. The main character has amnesia except remembering a girl he needs to find? That's been done to death. So then a bad guy teleports him to a random place where he's in a tournament... No comment. Then we get teleported again to another random place? Deus Ex Machina. The weird relationship between your main character and his bad side isn't explained very well, and both characters are extremely irritating I must admit (along with that boy thats retarded). Also, the lines for the evil guy are so bad and corny that they nearly inflict physical pain on me as I watch this flash. I think you're an amazing animator and artist, but this story needs a drastic rewrite. You should try to wrap this up soon and start a series with a little more depth. Good job though.
Not too shabby.
Don't worry about being a Egoraptor ripoff though, I think your style was pretty different from his. He would have been a lot shorter and to the point, you pretty much covered the whole game, so I definitely think you guys go about flashes in two different ways. This is funny though, good job.
IM NOT RIPPING HIM OFF ITS SUPOSSED TO BE LIKE THAT. DAMN.
Berns can eat shit!
I'm kidding. I liked this flash. I wish you hadn't stopped it in the middle. You should have called this part one or something. I was just getting into it. This flash rocks. Well animated and quite funny too. I can't wait for the next one.
Really though, Berns can choke on a dick. Eat some shit salad ya fairy!
Glad you liked it, and sorry you only had to watch a preview. Look forward to the next installment!
...and sorry things aren't working out with Berns.
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