00:00
00:00
View Profile Blessing

344 Movie Reviews

120 w/ Responses

10 reviews are hidden due to your filters.

I was really confused. Is defense curl an attack? It sounds like it would be some sort of defense buff but he didn't use it until after metapod had already used all of his attacks. Maybe it's a debuff? Either way I have a feeling there's a joke here I'm not getting so I'll skip the humor and rate this based on everything else. There wasn't much in the way of plot, some guy challenges another to a pokebattle and loses. The art was alright, but the animation wasn't very smooth the audio quality was decent but the voice acting wasn't anything spectacular. This flash was... Meh... Alright.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks for your...blessing. :D Defense Curl is actually a defense buff.

Well that was... Something...

Here's what I liked:
-The animation was very smooth, top-notch stuff.
-The art style was nice in most places.
-The audio was well done.

Here's what I didn't:
-The peak of this flash was "who the hell was that guy?" That would have been the perfect place to stop. Everything after that just sorta served to kill the comedy of the moment.
-2/3rds of this was really weird. Why did Trunks clothing suddenly not fit when he was hit by the sword? What was up with his back? Why is Vegeta reacting to this (if it's present Vegeta, if it's future Vegeta then what the hell is he doing here)?
-Why have Vegeta and Piccolo make out? That was weird and disturbing.

Overall, your art is fantastic, but it might be a good idea to seek out someone else to write for you in the future.

This was pretty good!

Here's what I liked:
-The animation was nice and smooth.
-The joke was funny and well executed.
-Loved the end.
-The audio was good.
-You worked a lot of items in there.

Here's what I didn't:
-The style changes. 100% everything that I didn't like about this flash had to do with the odd changes in Link's face. From the trolly wrinkles in the face on the main screen to the chubby face in the part with the fairy, I was definitely not a fan of those moments. Everyone seems to be doing that stuff though so I can't blame you.

Keep up the good work!

Rafiles responds:

Thank you for your review! It is very useful and i understand your critique + i fully agree with it. I don't have very much experience with face expressions yet, but what you say is true. Everyone is doing it, so i thought people liked it. That's why i wanted to try it too! But according the rating and views, i failed lol.

Ohhhh... I knew I had seen that arms joke somewhere word for word. I can't give you 5 stars for a copied idea that wasn't yours (and as far as I can tell didn't involve the original creator in any way), but since you at least own up to it I won't 0 bomb you. The animation wasn't too shabby and the voice acting was nice, so I'll give you 3 and a half.

Not bad. My biggest bit of advice would be to try to balance out the sound a bit more. The mother and the music from the driving scene were both so loud that i had to turn down the volume but then when they started speaking i had to turn it back up to understand everyone. Use some audio editing software to normalize the volume next time and you should be good to go. You show a lot of promise. Keep up the good work!

LixAndDean responds:

Yeah, you're right :/ I have Audacity now, should help a little :D

Thank for your advice :3

I will :D

It's better than the original at least...

Bbqbeefburgerman responds:

f u

The art wasn't bad! The writing was though. Very confusing. I kept waiting for some witty pun or something but this didn't really play off of anything from Legend of Korra. You could have replaced these characters with Sonic, Roger Rabbit, Sarah Palin, and a broken broomhandle and it would have made just as much sense. Randomness and humor work together in sort of a bell curve. The right amount of random can be hilarious, but when nothing makes sense at all it's just boring. This shot into that territory I'm afraid.

Be a blessing to others and you will be blessed.

Male

Messenger

God's Green Earth

Joined on 9/19/01

Level:
24
Exp Points:
6,020 / 6,400
Exp Rank:
7,798
Vote Power:
6.55 votes
Rank:
Police Lieutenant
Global Rank:
5,072
Blams:
846
Saves:
929
B/P Bonus:
14%
Whistle:
Normal
Medals:
113