Well...
This preview isn't really worth submitting. In the future, try to keep in mind that the preview will often be rated on it's own entertainment value rather than the series that it's about. I like your art and I probably will watch your flash, but this preview is more or less a waste of time and as such, I'm afraid I can't give it a very good score.
Yeah, but thank you for your interest in my art! Im happy to draw guns for anybodys flash as long as i get credit for it
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You're obviously very proud of your own homosexuality, but please don't just display it on newgrounds without a plot and decent music to back it up. Thank you.
I believe the music is very cool Mr.Clock
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I was a bit lost. I was a lot lost really. Some of your people looked really good, while others appeared like slightly enhanced "Simpsons" characters. The plot was so confusing. The sound was okay but the way the guy would talk without saying anything (text or otherwise) was a bit frustrating as I couldn't really venture a guess on what he was saying. Was there a plot? I'm confused about that. A lot of it was very stylized, and the majority of your artwork was visually stunning. Damn though, the story was so hard to follow... Personally I think you should get a better writer and animate for him, but whatever.
lol
i was never put in one line with the Simpsons yet, that's a new one.
as for me "getting a better writer", i will forgive you this insult and won't whack your empty head open with my new hammer, for you didn't know what were you writing.
If YOU didn't see a plot, it doesn't mean that it wasn't there....
To be fair...
...the animation was very good in most places. I don't doubt that this took quite some time and effort on your part, kudos to you. Stick flashes are usually pretty pointless, but I could tell this one attempted a plot. I know I'm going to get hell from other reviewers for saying this, but where I come from we're allowed to speak our minds and so I will. I feel that overall this flash didn't progress the plot very far. It would have been better to delay the release a bit and add a little further to the story. The sound altered in volume a few times and some people didn't sound very convincing. I won't say that it sucks because it's sticks, because they're detailed sticks. However, with the amount of effort you put into the sticks it would be nice to see how you do a non-stick flash. Your animation is well done, like I said, but you must admit that if it's referred to as a stick it's obviously lacking some important features as far as appearance goes. Regardless, shows a lot of potential.
Yeah that was a fair review, thanx.
I'm doing a nonstick currently and im taking serious time over it. its part of a college project so should be pretty good. Heres a link for what to expect graphically. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/2935322/
fbf, not tweened animation.
TOTAL UNREALISTIC CRAP!!!
EVERYONE KNOWS YOU CAN'T TELEPORT WHILE CARRYING THE FLAG!!! ;)
lol, ya got me there, so i simply reply with *runs behind a rock*
Good but...
This was good. I liked this a lot. What parts of the body you DID draw were drawn incredibly well however that brings me to my criticism. The particular style you chose doesnt seem right for a DBZ flash. The stick-figure-esq heads would fit well with stick hands, but with real hands the contrasting head just seems... well... lazy, to be honest. And the floating hands are a bit out of place. In DBZ they use their arms a lot for blocking and headlocks and such. Seeing Goku's hands floating in front of his face doesn't seem as dramatic as seeing Goku trying desperately to shield himself from a blast with his arms crossing his chest. Don't get me wrong, I want to stress how much I like your art as far as the hair and clothing go. The blasts are good too and the sounds worked great. The ending (I won't spoil) really made me say wow, being the DBZ fan that I am (that is, if I understood what happened right). I understand that you have a rayman type art style and I think that's great if that's what you want to go with. However, I just don't think it fits for DBZ. Just... Consider it. GJ though Overall.
Sorry, I don't have that kind of time to make limbs, that would require maybe 1000 times more tweening then I did with just hands, feet, a body, and a head. My next movie is in the making and has all limbs, etc.
Nice animation, but you're NOT supporting us...
I have family in the american army and these are their views, I agree fully. If you don't support the war you don't support the troops, it's impossible. They're out there giving their lives to make sure that Saddam doesn't decide to launch chemical strikes all over the place. They're putting their lives on the line and people like you are telling them that it's wrong and calling that support? Support is aiding in one way or another for someone to succeed. They believe in their cause and if you don't then you're not supporting them. We are at war and you cannot change that. If you don't want us to win, then you must be wanting us to lose because there's no way that everyone will suddenly say "let's leave that other country alone." People like you are the ones who want to look the other way to promote peace while at the same time allowing Saddam to mass weapons for war. Our "peace" right now would no doubt result in a far greater number of civilian casualties worldwide 10 years down the road when Saddam decides to go happy with chem weapons. There will always be war and you are ignorant to think otherwise. World peace is impossible, it would simply result in war over much smaller things (for instance whether the cowboys are better than steelers). Sometimes war is necessary for peace, kiddo.
There's obviously no way for me to persuade you of any other idea. You probably think that because I don't support Bush I'm unpatriotic. And that is not the definition of a patriot. If I had my way, we'd still have UN inspectors in Iraq looking for those weapons of mass destructions. If we found those weapons then I'd send in the troops. So don't say all I want to do is look the other way. I know that "world peace" is impossible without conflict, but there are ways to get around war which is what I support. Peaceful resolutions to these problems make more sense than just picking up guns and being forced blindly into war.
Oh lord, where to begin...
I know, the music. Sweet jesus, what shitty taste in music you have. Especially for dbz. This didn't make a whole lot of sense. The more you have to explain in your author's comments, the more your flash seems half-assed. The action (i think that's what you were trying to do there) was pretty much motion tweening with no effort at all made for animation. Overall, the poor quality of this attempt at a dbz flash made a poorly drawn blue stick looking thing fall from my eye, just like vegeta in your flash.
Well the movie wasnt focused on the music. I hope you feel better about yourself after making me feel bad. I put all the effort I had into it. And just to show you how much you know about crtitism, why exactly did you give Interactivity a one? My movie is in no way more interactive than an actual dbz movie. You, my friend, are a waste of air.
And here's your review...
The art is great. A good blend of quality and animation. So many flashes lack one or the other. Yes this is short so you can't expect it to outdo a kickass 3 or 4 minute flash, but you knew that before you submitted it right? ;) Moving on, the audio is a bit hard to understand. It's okay, but maybe the voice actor should speak more clearly for the sake of the flash. The Morpheus' last line could've been made a little funnier, but more or less it worked for the point. The only problem I really have would be with you using this flash to advertise your other flash. It had it's 15 minutes of fame and people will most likely take a look at your other submissions anyway. The end is coming - PK
please rate according to how the movie was, not because of things I said in the comments section. Besides, it's MY comments section, why shouldn't I say things I want?
Where to start....
Your preloader didn't work at all, it started without waiting. Then Zero attacks mega man without warning. After both of them stand there like idiots (or like 7 year olds trying to figure out the buttons) mega man jumps away only to be attacked by Zero again and, yet again, run. This should be called "Zero pointlessly attacks Mega Man and Mega Man turns the other cheek: The 15 second platinum edition"
Like i said it was buggy. It was also a preview so it was just scenes from what is to come. It didnt have sound because why make a preview too big. The story will be in the full version.
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