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IT'S THE BIEEEEEEBBBBB

All kidding aside, this is an impressive work. You're a very good artist. My kudos.

Bullsik responds:

Thank you!

This is really good.

So many bright colors. So wonderfully done.

Creepy...

But in a good way. I like your style.

Ups and downs... Ins and outs...

You're a very good artist. I like the coloring on this a lot the posing and the clothing are drawn well too for the most part. I understand the white space but I think it would have better been spent with something a bit more entertaining in the background, even if it was just a gentle gradient. My biggest gripe comes in the form of the proportions. He definitely has a female body here. Typically, males have wider shoulders than hips. I know you claimed that he had wider hips in the anime, though most of the pictures I look at have his hips about as wide as his rib cage. You should not make them so round at least. Ash's torso is more or less a straight line from his arm pit to his hip (not as much when he's topless, but almost always when he has a shirt on. The dramatic inward, outward, inward curves you've placed on him is what's costing him his masculinity. Try to simply make it more subtle, less extreme, and then I think you'll be fine.

ZachsAnomaly responds:

Well with his shirt on, his shirt gives him that straight line type thing--but with his pants on he's like a solid wall of legs with giant feet---strangely he's a stick figure when he takes his pants and shoes off, with tiny itty bitty feet.. There's got to be some magic trick or something going on there. LOL. But excuses excuses, I'm a sucker for huge hips, I can't resist.

Silly Johannek.

Obviously Johannek has never seen "Batman Returns". The penguin's hands in that movie look almost identical to her hand, so clearly we can gather that she was abandoned in the sewers of gotham, raised by penguins, and one day emerged to find the pink-faced Asian guy who must have fed her a lot of fish to be allowed that close to her. I believe she's making a "I'm chewing one right now" smile in this picture.

Seriously though, this is a nice work of art. The pink theme gives it a unique style and the contrast of lights and darks really draws the focus to her smiling face. It's really only your author's comments, in my opinion, that draw focus to her hand. XD

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

I really do like that story though.
I'm going to stick with it.
Thanks (:
haha
xx

I have 3 problems with this picture.

First, the head seems a little disproportionate. Second, her figure isn't very appealing. I think she needs to be slightly thinner and with slightly bigger boobs. I'm not trying to be ignorant or anything, but then again, with the shred of clothing you chose to give her you should at least make her nice to look at. Which brings me to the third problem. I don't see how this is rated E for everyone. I know they must have given you the chance to rate it yourself. You nearly show her nasty parts, this is definitely not E material. Deceitful. Aside from those things, this isn't bad. The shading is nice.

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