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[Reve - Alternate Outfit]

Just a suggestion...

But if I'm understanding the outfit right, I don't think the big boob version would have a w shape at the top like that unless it's attached to a string that leads straight into her chest in between the breasts. There's nothing to cause the middle to go in, know what I mean? So it should be more like a u from one side of the boobs to the other side of the boobs. The one on the left is kind of cute though. XD

Jcdr responds:

Yeah, I can notice it now, thanks a lot for the suggestion

[Justin Bieber cover]

IT'S THE BIEEEEEEBBBBB

All kidding aside, this is an impressive work. You're a very good artist. My kudos.

Bullsik responds:

Thank you!

[We Welcome In : Fifth Gen Ash]

Ups and downs... Ins and outs...

You're a very good artist. I like the coloring on this a lot the posing and the clothing are drawn well too for the most part. I understand the white space but I think it would have better been spent with something a bit more entertaining in the background, even if it was just a gentle gradient. My biggest gripe comes in the form of the proportions. He definitely has a female body here. Typically, males have wider shoulders than hips. I know you claimed that he had wider hips in the anime, though most of the pictures I look at have his hips about as wide as his rib cage. You should not make them so round at least. Ash's torso is more or less a straight line from his arm pit to his hip (not as much when he's topless, but almost always when he has a shirt on. The dramatic inward, outward, inward curves you've placed on him is what's costing him his masculinity. Try to simply make it more subtle, less extreme, and then I think you'll be fine.

ZachsAnomaly responds:

Well with his shirt on, his shirt gives him that straight line type thing--but with his pants on he's like a solid wall of legs with giant feet---strangely he's a stick figure when he takes his pants and shoes off, with tiny itty bitty feet.. There's got to be some magic trick or something going on there. LOL. But excuses excuses, I'm a sucker for huge hips, I can't resist.

[Candy]

Silly Johannek.

Obviously Johannek has never seen "Batman Returns". The penguin's hands in that movie look almost identical to her hand, so clearly we can gather that she was abandoned in the sewers of gotham, raised by penguins, and one day emerged to find the pink-faced Asian guy who must have fed her a lot of fish to be allowed that close to her. I believe she's making a "I'm chewing one right now" smile in this picture.

Seriously though, this is a nice work of art. The pink theme gives it a unique style and the contrast of lights and darks really draws the focus to her smiling face. It's really only your author's comments, in my opinion, that draw focus to her hand. XD

XxThumbsuckerxX responds:

I really do like that story though.
I'm going to stick with it.
Thanks (:
haha
xx