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I don't get it. Yes, Hawaii is an annoying catchphrase, but you should really consider picking a different one (something that doesn't rhyme with kawaii) so that people don't confuse it with kawaii. It may make the catch phrase less annoying in the process. You could pick another pleasant location like Cali, or shorten Hawaii like "waii". Honestly though if Hawaii is the only phrase you're into I'd advise dropping it completely. It's really really irritating, confusing, and unlikable.

That aside, I don't understand the picture as a whole. Why is she fascinated with plastic bags? Why is she putting it on her head? Is she about to suffocate herself and end the Hawaii threat forever?

You get a 2.5 for clean art, but confusing content and a painful catchphrase keep me from giving you more.

SquirrellyJack responds:

Your review is so Hawaii!! :3c

I just lol'd for 15 minutes. You have a great sense of humor!

SignHerePlease responds:

thank you XD

I like the coloring, but she seems awful excited for someone whose legs have been dislocated and broken. Even if it were possible to twist your leg that intensely, I can tell by the expression on her face that she isn't about to pee herself and she isn't shy or embarrassed, so my conclusion is that she's either the victim of a horrible beating whose legs healed misaligned, or she's mentally retarded and just really happy. Either way, she's in a good mood so good for her. Guess she's making lemonade out of lemons, eh?

bocodamondo responds:

yep. i really hate doing this kind of leg position. or atleast its hard for me to do it...but apprently everyone else is doing it. so i have no other choice

Your coloring is good. A little... Orange... But good. Most of my complaints would be how slutty the character design is, but if this is just a commission then the character design wouldn't really be your fault. Pretty good artistically.

SignHerePlease responds:

Slutty? THIS is slutty clothing???
Baggy Shorts? and an unzipped jacket....
Go look at any of my other galleries and you'll find sluttly clothing
or the lack of in fact

This looks kinda cool. Unfortunately, it came up while I was looking for Bowser pictures. It has no Bowser in it whatsoever (despite being labeled Bowser), so I'm dropping the zero bomb.

JoshSummana responds:

I changed the tag because I have a Bowser picture in the same series... nice constructive crit though.. well done!

Kinda neat, simple and enjoyable art style, but you lose points for rating this "E" when it has bloody parts and the F word. I don't like being lied to.

Chickenlump responds:

I only lie to protect you.

Cool

She looks like an interesting, though mentally disturbed, character. Why does she suddenly get naked though? Dirty...

JustinianKnight responds:

It's a guy...Mortimer is a male name...

Awesome.

I like your style a lot, you're a great artist, though your character design is a little... Androgynous.

Seth12D responds:

Thanks, though I had to look up that word lol, yeah Noodle has been mistaking to be a boy, many how don't know the characters that well do.

I don't know what the hell I'm looking at.

But I like it. Believe it!

Loath-some responds:

I'm believing it!

She kinda is...

But I can't understand what she's saying. And there's text telling me to vote high and I absolutely hate being told what to do, so the score drops out of spite. Have enough confidence in your skills not to have to rely on begging people for a vote.

DragonPunch responds:

Yeah, not such a smart idea huh? Guess I gotta do some fixin'!

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